Morn and Night

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  1. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    Morn and Night

    Through a window, he saw the early morn(ing) sun gently rise,
    As the motionless trees embrace the fiery rays,
    Even the birds sprang and emulated their voices to welcome dawn,
    Yet, darkness never ceases,
    She is quiet; no bird sings in her midst neither do they move,
    Only the stars’ twinkling gives away to motion,
    And temporal death visits,
    When shall the sun rise to restore,
    When shall the birds come to sing once more?
     
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  3. **..AhMeD..**

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    thx sheba for those so sweet words u wrote


    .........................


    and yesfor sure birds will sing once more and for ever

    .........................


    urs always
     
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  5. SamiAlganhey

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    [a7la1=00FF00]Sister Sheba,
    Nice words. I really enjoyed it. Keep on Posting
    Thanks Again
    [bor=FFFF00]RegardS[/bor][bor=FF0000].A.K.A.[/bor][bor=0000FF]Samiسامي الجانحي[/a7la1][/bor]
     
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  7. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    Sami and Ahmed

    Thanks for replying, I'm glad you liked my poem

    :)
     
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  9. Rami83

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    When love to spread over the world, and the hate vanish.. this is the answer of your questions in my opinion..

    Well my sister, it is a very good attempt to depiction our reality, yes the darkeness is the master now.. am agree with you at all.. But do you know what made me so happy in your attempt. It is the glimpse of hope when you said (Only the stars’ twinkling gives away to motion)..

    In fact I had written a poem a bout the morning when I was in the secondary school, I searched for it a lot until I found it in my old papers to publish it here and I would be very gratefull if you give me your opinion..


    My day

    In today's morning light
    I open my eye's
    a new day before me
    that's full of surprise
    I know that today
    life hands me its gifts
    I pray to stay strong
    and accept all it gives
    to move without movement
    to see without sight
    I strive for my peace
    every day and each night
    a bright coming future
    with new goals and some gains
    my outlook each day
    will stay just the same!


    Finally please accept all my love and regards
    Rami
     
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  11. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    Rami

    Your presence is always lovely as usual. I liked the passion in the poem. You've got the qualities that qualify you as a poet. Your words are fine and delicate. And your statements are enthusiastic. You just need to work a little on your grammer


    Please accept all my appreciation

    :)
     
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  13. العسيب

    العسيب مشرف سابق

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    [grade="FF4500 4B0082 0000FF 000000 F4A460"]i thought that its' fell free to print it sis
    right ????
    its really very nice words

    In the morning of my night
    The darkness is so very bright

    dreaming
    hoping
    Waiting
    and looking
    to the sky .......DO YOU KNOW WHY IAM SO ???
    CUZ iam same Waiting for answer
    When shall the birds come to sing once more
    [/grade]


    regards
     
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  15. SamiAlganhey

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    [gdwl][grade="00008B FF6347 008000 4B0082 FF0000"]Anytime[/grade][/gdwl]
     
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  17. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    It's touching
    welcome back sis sheba
    aww it seems we have lots of poets over here :)
    then guys, why don't you show us a little of these talents to be gone throw replies and opinions
    regards sheba and the rest
     
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  19. T_K

    T_K قلم فضي

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    nice poem SHEBA
    though full of sorrowness.
    However, hopefully, like u said
    the sun will rise to restore
    and the birds will come to sing once more

    accept my regards

    TK
     

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