My Appointment ! .... A poem

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  1. sasa

    sasa عضو

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    [align=left]dear friends,

    this is a poem of me. pls read it and tell me if u enjoy it.
    thanks...
    sasa


    My Appointment !
    Don't ask me , my friend , don't ask me
    Which time you'll see me?
    Or where ? or how ?
    Cause may I tell you I'll be here
    Then I be there .
    May I invite you to cinema
    But. . . before reach there
    You lost me , dear .
    May you come to visit me
    But. . . meat someone grave me.
    I don't know when I'll go
    And where or how. So
    Please , dear , don't ask me.
    But . . . ask the fate about me.
    He know more and more than me.
    Many .. many time ,
    I come to myself on the time,
    But. . . I do not found me.
     
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  3. SamiAlganhey

    SamiAlganhey عضو متميّز

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    Its great , looks like you put a lot of though to it. its good sometimes to express your feelings.
    Keep it up
    I really enjoyed it
     
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  5. sasa

    sasa عضو

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    [movek=right]Dear Sami,

    Thanks a lot for ur visiting.

    Hope tht u keep it up 2

    sasa[/movek]
     
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  7. العسيب

    العسيب مشرف سابق

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    [grade="FF4500 4B0082 0000FF 000000 F4A460"]
    .Begin with a clear introductory sentence. If your poem is to rhyme, then end this sentence with a word that has a rhyme (like lunch and punch). Then write the second sentence, having it end with a rhyming word.
    its really very nice step ahead bro
    i mean keep it ..like so

    accept all my love

    you rs
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    [grade="FF4500 4B0082 0000FF 000000 F4A460"]there is never wrong time to do something right [/grade]
     
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  9. sasa

    sasa عضو

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    [grade="00008B FF6347 008000 4B0082"]Dear brother , Asyeeb,

    thanks a lot 4 ur visit.

    Sasa
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