friendship has changed!

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  1. T_K

    T_K قلم فضي

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    first, I wanna say Alsalamu Alaikum all. I've been away for a while. I was in Yemen, and just got back a few days ago. How're u A7mad and Magdoline, and everyone else. Well, I'm kinna busy these days trying to get my things back on track, but i'll try to keep up with yah, and here's something I wrote. I hope u like it


    Once upon a time
    Friends used to rhyme
    That friendship was as hard as a dime
    And to break it, it would be a crime

    Now, friends come and go
    Like disposable shavers you use and throw
    You lose them before you even know
    How you met them or why they had to go

    Friends are out to be called ‘frands’
    For now they come in different brands
    There’s the rich friend with the grands
    Who you’ll keep in the palm of your hands
    And there’s the player friend with the female fans
    Who introduces you to the girls with tans!

    Then there’s the friend you grew up with
    The one you went through good and bad with

    That’s the one who got beaten up for you
    Without even having a clue
    Except that friendship was due
    And that’s the one you’re ready to leave
    Because you found a new crew!
    I don’t understand how such a friendship does end
    How a friend drops you in a second
    For some money or a chick he met in the weekend
    How your lifetime friend
    Leaves you in a day without any hurts to mend

    A true friend is one who’s always there
    When you have a problem, he’s always near
    And when you fake your smile and hide your tear
    He sees the hurt in your eyes and fear

    And it’s very hard to find that someone
    So if u still have one
    Keep him like a son
    And enjoy the true friendship and fun
    That others couldn’t have done!

    By: TK
     
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  3. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    .Good Lord! That was witty

    How was Yemen? Did you like it there? Tell us about your trip, please
     
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  5. PureYemeni

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    §¤°~®~°¤§It is a good try, hope u to keep on ,

    really i do like ur poem , but i would like to give my opinion. Friendship never ever changes, people change and keep changing. values are always stable in all ages & eras . we , the human race who change .

    so plz do not blame friendship, blame people and thier greed .
    True friends r always thier every where arround u . just look for them and do not give up.
    §¤°~®~°¤§
     
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  7. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    Our genius boy TK
    i'm really so happy to have your nick name again here
    you wouldn't believe it if I told you that you left a big hole in the forum since you became absent
    and as usual, a unique post from a special boy
    best wishes buddy
    regards
     
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  9. أبو يمن اصلي

    أبو يمن اصلي قلم فضي

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    WB pal
    that was impressive

    how did u find yemen
     
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  11. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    what's really impressive is the existance of your nickname again in the oasis of English
    Brother Abdullah,we missed you dude
    obviously,it seems that marriage had influnce on your life
    man don't be stingy to drop some of your genius words over here
    spreading some perfume of your English
    Welcome back
    YOU and TK
    regards
     
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  13. ماجدولين

    ماجدولين مشرفة سابقة مشرف سابق

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    Wa3alaikum alsalam dear T_K,,

    Where r u man............!!
    What take u so long

    we miss u Magellan we can't imagine the forum without u,,,

    T_K bro. I do like those phrases:

    You lose them before you even know
    How you met them or why they had to go!!

    I don’t understand how such a friendship does end !!

    How a friend drops you in a second !!

    U can't imagine how those ques. hurt me deep
    Cause I met many people that I believe them from my soul ,but unfortunately they fell me down>>>.


    But u know what?!
    I still have good friends indeed..
    cause I find them like u said:

    A true friend is one who’s always there
    When you have a problem, he’s always near
    And when you fake your smile and hide your tear
    He sees the hurt in your eyes and fear


    And I'm lucky to have them..


    Thanx T_K for this great post,,

    Regards,,
    Mag.



    :)
     
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  15. SamiAlganhey

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    Hey TK, First i wanna say Welcome back, the great yemen. I was there 3months ago.
    And second, that was a great poem. Keep it up man. And stay the same.
    Your Yemeni Friend Sami Alganhey
     
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  17. T_K

    T_K قلم فضي

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    Sheba
    PureYemeni
    Adel
    ABA
    Magdoline
    Sami

    Thank you all for commenting on my post
    and for welcoming me back ..
    Honest to Allah, I had a good time in Yemen .. Now, that doesn't mean that Yemen is
    a good place for everyone .. some would probably find it very unpleasant or suitable to stay in ..
    because of the increased attraction to Qat for instance .. and other factors ..

    For me, I found my "rahah nafsiah." that is my self comfort .. between my family and friends whom
    I grew up with ..

    It's true that Yemen doesn't seem to be advancing in the practical universal economic and business
    fields, though. The Qat profits is still in a constant increase (haha) and I can't lie and say
    that I didn't chew; because I did. Also, Sana'a is basically dead after Assr time, for the reason that
    everyone is in some Majliss chewing Qat. However, I also saw, to be fair, some developments. The streets are getting cleaner and more decorative with trees and such things.

    Nevertheless, for some reason, I still love Sana'a and to be in Sana'a
    and here's what I had to say about it

    San3a is the place I long for
    And even though it’s full of bees and disease
    At least u don’t eat all day cheese
    And wake up every morning to sneeze
    From the cold weather and breeze
    In the New York area, Queens

    Yes, dust is all around San3a
    But I miss it and it means to me the Donia

    Here, you can’t find dust anywhere
    But you still got to shower and clean your ear
    And put on deodorant every morning before you wear
    The clothes you think people will care
    So I think it’s only fair
    That san3a be the dear
    For the far and the near
    And not just to spend one year
    But a life time to share


    My regards to all

    TK
     
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  19. ديلو

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    [align=left]waaw ... I'm really interested in this kind of poems

    thanks alot bro TK for posting this .. and i hope you enjoyed your trip to Yemen

    yours
    Waleed :)
     

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