All is Gone

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  1. Sheba

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    She said, ‘All that I love is gone,’
    They said, ‘But there is the earth, the sea, and the clouds,’
    She said, ‘The earth is stained with blood and is full of horror, and all that I love is gone,’
    They said, ‘But there is the sea and the clouds,’
    She said, ‘The Sea is empty yet devours and is never full, and all that I love is gone,’
    They said, ‘But you have the clouds,’
    She said, ‘The clouds are veils of sulfur and acid rain,’
    They said, ‘But the rain, we love the rain,’
    She said, ‘All that I love is gone.’


    Took 1 week to think out, write, & re-write :rolleyes:
     
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  3. Arabia*Infelix

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    Did it take you that long to realise that nothing left for you ??:)1
     
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    It might take one week to produce such as prose, but straight up,
    I loved that way of switching dialogue.
    I did enjoy reading it sis. broadcast.
     
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  7. AlBOSS

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    I loved it
    it is just
    Great


     
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  9. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    ! No, actually.............It took me years to realize that I was left with nothing
     
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    Thanks, I'm glad you did
     
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    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    Well, it takes someone like me a while to create such a sincere 'poem' ..... But you have to know that I'm not that much of a poet, but a much more of a thinker. I dore literature however, it is in my opinion the most greatest thing you can enjoy...... it takes you miles away, whilst you are standing in your place
     
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    I know very well how long it would take someone to realise what you have realised

    I was just trying to tease you…. ;)1

    In fact, I am amongst people who do realise late what they have missed

    I am not much of a judge but your words were just awsome and touchy

    You know what, I wish sometimes if I could write poetry, I have got many thoughts in my mind

    But they are just thoughts, only thoughts!!1
     
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  17. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    Not bad sister
    one chore to be masterpiece, but we always can't get the top quickly with rush desire,it starts very tiny tiny and ends very shining pearl
    good one sister ,and considered outstanding
    regards
     
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  19. Sheba

    Sheba عضو فعّال

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    You don't need to be a judge to tell me what you think of those words. Anyone with 'literature sense' can add his/her thoughts . You don't have to write poetry, write short or even long stories, it's all literature at the end

    Thanks for your kind words
     

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