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  1. العسيب

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    [grade="00008B FF6347 FF1493 4B0082"]which the best one and why

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    by the shore, by the sea
    i am weary of being bitter and weary of being wise
    she might have known it in the earlier spring
    noises that strive to tear
    those on the top say they know you, earth—they are liars
    there is a country full of wine
    did you ever hear of
    those on the top say they know you, earth—they are liars
    the child who threw away leaf after leaf
    the body may confine
    last night the full moon laid a cloth of white
    last midnight
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  3. العسيب

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    [grade="00008B DC143C 008000 4B0082"]2


    short and sweet, and we've come to the end of it
    do you think, my boy, when i put my arms around you
    look out upon the stars, my love
    simplicity
    do you think, my boy, when i put my arms around you
    just as my fingers on these keys
    if i were very sure
    one by one, like leaves from a tree
    now while my lips are living
    among the smoke and fog of a december afternoon
    wrap the earth in cloudy weather
    i have to say good-night



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  5. Dilemma

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    No. 2 is the best

    Basically,:( I can not stand poem, spicily those who has a western root and taste:p.
    but I’ve tried to get the nearest idea to our culture, and I found this,
    No. 2 is a little compositional one. :rolleyes:Thanks brother Al- aseeb
    Yours truly,
    Dilemma:):):)
     
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  7. العسيب

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    [grade="8B0000 FF0000 FF7F50"][motr1]its really at the goal [/motr1]
    thx brother
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