Love is a crime

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  1. T_K

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    Hi everyone
    I hope I'm not posting this
    for the second time!


    Love is a crime

    Ya you heard me love is a crime
    Who said it was a fortune
    Man it’s not even a dime
    Man the sun doesn’t even shine
    Because of all the bloody crying
    Of victims of the same crime
    All ending up paying the same fine
    And that’s … their hearts dying!

    First we choose the wrong chick
    The one with the nice hair and neck
    The one who wants to party and drink
    The one to leave you for some wacky ass jerk
    Who then goes through the same ass flick!

    And what else from love do we gain?
    Males and females going insane
    That’s no way to maintain
    The life we live and still be sane
    It’s a way to lose our minds
    Our soles, families in no times

    It’s a shame how we act big and tough
    But can’t resist a girl’s touch
    It’s a shame when we fall with a big crush
    We can’t even eat lunch
    Hell we can’t even sleep much

    Man it’s pitiful
    How we can love a girl so beautiful
    Or a girl loves a guy so truthful
    And then find out they’re just not so faithful

    Man! Get real
    This thing is not the real deal
    It’s not the ideal
    The feeling we’re supposed to feel
    I’ll tell you it’s a nice dream
    So nice it feels like eating ice cream

    But too bad it’s just a fairy tale
    One that comes alive only in sunny dale
    Where the sun and moon never fail
    One that you see when you go to asleep
    And stops as soon as you get too deep
    U might even see it in Disney land
    Or 007 movie brand
    But not in my yet thinking mind


    I wonder if we’ll ever find true love
    Where money and the Benz are not above
    Where love has no specific pre-reqs
    And if it’s not, then the hell with it
    It can go with the rest


    TK
     
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  3. Rami83

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    love is a victim

    WOW
    what anice post dear brother
    But i think that love is not crime , Love is the first victim of lovers act
    So i advice to change the concept of the love from a crime to a victim

    This my opinion

    Finally Thank u very much 4 ur very very beautiful words
    Go On

    Love
    Rami
     
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  5. T_K

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    Rami
    Thanks for the reply, and for your opinion

    Previously, I have posted other poems, in
    which love was the main concept. So, this
    is not the entire ideal thinking that
    I have against love. This could just
    correspond to one incident or one side
    of Love. And yes, you are right that
    Love is the victim of lovers, but
    also vice versa; lovers are victims
    of Love.

    TK
     
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  7. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    outstanding genius boy
     
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  9. حضرمية مغتربة

    حضرمية مغتربة مشرف سابق

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    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

    nice word my brother TK
     
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  11. Rami83

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    =================================
    I C

    dear bro. am agree with every word u said it

    am now understand u verrrrrrrrry well

    Love
    Rami
     
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  13. T_K

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    Adel
    Hadramiah

    I appreciat your
    support

    my regards
    TK
     

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