In the Train station

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  1. rayan31

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    These words I wrote when I finished my studied in Timisoara city in Romania, in the train station when I was leaving the city for the last time
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    [color=FF0000]In the train[/color]

    [color=0000FF]It's time and the train is ready to leave
    The cabin is full, many stranger people
    My heart is knocking, it's ten thirty
    I look at the window and stay lonely[/color]

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    Go on train I have no nerve to wait
    It is time, an alarm, a green traffic light
    I feel it's leaving with us goodbye
    I see just shadows in a hurry near my cabin[/color]


    [color=FF6600]It's a moment when my pains say nothing
    I get my hand to face and clean my tears
    But in my soul deep I feel a stranger thing
    Hurry up train I feel I'm going to cry[/color]
     
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    Abu Rayan
    once again, ur talent is illustrated
    just concentrate on ur word form and order
    and u'll be on ur way
    keep it up man

    TK
     
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  5. ماجدولين

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    [align=left][color=660066]Dear Rayan>>>

    ur words are so soft so gauzy >>>>

    u describe one of the most painful moments of our life>>>>

    the moment of good-bye !

    who could hold up his tears then>>>>

    I can't>>

    especialy when i leave someone dear to me at the other side>>>>

    Dear Rayan u make me live ur situation>>


    nice work<<<:)>>>

    ur's,
    Mag.[/color]
     
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    Thank you very much

    for your words

    which

    encourage me

    so much

    My best wishes for you[/color]
     
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    Dear sister Magdoleen

    As you said exactly

    The moment Good-bye is the most difficult moment

    I think no one can hold his tears then

    Something more to tell

    Those tears still going on

    My best wishes
    my dearest sister

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