See girl you got me in the sticky ty situation

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  1. هزيم الروح

    هزيم الروح عضو

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    See girl you got me in the sticky ty situation
    dont blame it on me blame it on my simple temptation
    you lead me somehow, someway to my destination
    without you romin' navigation with no calculation
    i know the luther time and gouchi dont mean nothing
    apprieciate everything you do i guess that means something
    i know a lot of times you get up and just leave
    but you do love that is something that i do believe
    i'll give it all up just to get back on your hugs and kisses
    cause when you with me your without all competition
    and know from time to time you might see my eye drifting
    but your the one that takes and catches all my attention
    i know you see them houchy numbers all in my phone
    you're like my OJ and now my juice is all gone
    so give me one more chance and take this last dance lady
    just thinking 'bout you on my life makes me go crazy
    I Love You Baby!
    I Love You so much Baby I Love You so so so ..........

    do you remembrance where did we do that Last time
    did you oh I'm don't forget that never ..


    sweet heart
     
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  3. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    Dear Hzeem alroo7
    I strongly liked these touching words and at the same time i wonder if these words were written by you!

    what a full participation with preferential emotions and semitic feelings

    regards
     
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  5. هزيم الروح

    هزيم الروح عضو

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    thanks for comment editor-in-chief
     
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  7. T_K

    T_K قلم فضي

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    pretty strong words
    good stuff bro

    TK
     
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  9. هزيم الروح

    هزيم الروح عضو

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    thanks for comment t_k
     
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  11. ماجدولين

    ماجدولين مشرفة سابقة مشرف سابق

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    [color=660066]See girl you got me in the sticky ty situation
    dont blame it on me blame it on my simple temptation
    you lead me somehow, someway to my destination
    without you romin' navigation with no calculation
    i know the luther time and gouchi dont mean nothing
    apprieciate everything you do i guess that means something
    i know a lot of times you get up and just leave
    but you do love that is something that i do believe
    i'll give it all up just to get back on your hugs and kisses
    cause when you with me your without all competition
    and know from time to time you might see my eye drifting
    but your the one that takes and catches all my attention
    i know you see them houchy numbers all in my phone
    you're like my OJ and now my juice is all gone
    so give me one more chance and take this last dance lady
    just thinking 'bout you on my life makes me go crazy
    I Love You Baby!
    I Love You so much Baby I Love You so so so ..........

    do you remembrance where did we do that Last time
    did you oh I'm don't forget that never ..


    sweet heart
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    [align=left][color=660066]Dear Soul Rumble,,


    ur words r great and u have that pure talent to be a good poet someday>>>


    but take my advice and focus more on ur structures>>>


    waiting for ur new posts>>

    Best Regards,,
    Mag.:)[/color]
     
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  13. SkyLighter

    SkyLighter عضو متميّز

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    awesome

    hope it was a real talent not just a product of one time incident: mean that if you wrote it because you being hit by love , then sadly it like being hit by a cargo train,and will take long time in both intensive care and rehab.....just kidding , it's really neat
     
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  15. هزيم الروح

    هزيم الروح عضو

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    thanks for comment mag
     
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  17. هزيم الروح

    هزيم الروح عضو

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    thanks for comment SkyLighter
     
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  19. ناخبية

    ناخبية عضو

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    Hey that was a good poem. You should elobrate more
    and use your commas b/c they seperate your sentances
    and it makes the poem a lot more
    easier to understand and read.

    Keep up the good work!
     

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