Under the moon light

الكاتب : Thunder Girl   المشاهدات : 456   الردود : 2    ‏2003-11-30
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  1. Thunder Girl

    Thunder Girl عضو

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    Under the moon light
    I think about you
    And the love day
    Between me & you
    I remember you..
    When you say to me:
    Love you ..love you..
    Love you is world with out end
    You are the first love ..
    And the final one..
    But now???
    What happened with you?
    What is the change?
    Are you do not want me?
    Say this
    Do not leave me go by my dreams
    To the far away!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOURS
    TG
     
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  3. جراهام بل

    جراهام بل مشرف سابق

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    Dear Nada :)
    Well, i'm not the expert in such a poems,but as a reader i think they are totally outstanding;furthermore,i noticed you have a a beautiful sense which needs some practice by contacting and reading more about this field

    regards
     
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  5. Thunder Girl

    Thunder Girl عضو

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    hellooooo our moderator
    thank u for passing by my thread besides your advice.well it's a good encouragement

    yours
    TG
     

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