Stories: My story with Life

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  1. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    My Story with Life

    She told me that she loves him...she told me that she is dying to see him everyday and dying more of being not able to talk to him...!!! I think that she got the wrong man..!!! Simply, he is my dream knight

    I couldn't tell her that he is the one that he stole my attention for the first time...she is my dearest friend who is considering me as an ideal person that she wish to be like one day

    I could not tell her the truth...I felt a big lump which stuck in my throat that may come out by shouting and crying...But, unfortunately ...I couldn't
    I hugged my pains as a mother hugged her baby....I can not leave them
    I endured all what she was saying about her feelings and eager....I was smiling at her and try to support her by giving herself a time to think wisely....Actually, she was suffering from his ignorance....!!!! She was crying all the time she met me...she was complaining from his treatment...what can I tell her?? And how??? I'm that person who doesn't speak about his feeling to anyone, to be in his eyes that good person who can advice people but unfortunately, can not advice himself
    My love always was and still hidden....Not appear to anyone even My Dream Knight.
    He knows nothing about my felling and he thinks that it is a love form one side...!!! Alas...I wish if I could show him...But I can not...It is me and can never change Me

    My dearest friend, I want to tell that you are my dearest and lovely person in my heart and no one can be more valuable than you are...!!! I'd like to tell you that I'm leaving today to my town, I think I need some rest there, so forgive me if I leave you these days...I really need a rest

    Yours


    That was my letter to her before I left.

    To be continue


    Bero
     
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  3. samusa2121

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    wooow that is hard ...
    But we waiting .
    Is it real!!
     
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  5. BLUE RAY

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    woooooooooowwwww,,,

    that sounds so sad, something , from inside the heart is trying to

    get to light


    waiting for the rest


    thank u
     
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  7. Rita Alshoaibi

    Rita Alshoaibi مشرف سابق

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    i want to see this story going on...............
    its a sad story and as sam asked u - is it a real story?


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  9. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    Two weeks later: No answer ...Not even a message...Ahhhh. what I expected, it may happened...They fell in love and everything went ok...Nice...This is the end then....I opened my little window in my little room and smiled to the birds and prayed for both of them to be happy...This is life
    I came back to the city and my eyes were watching all people as if I was not there all my lifetime. I went to her home to punish her of being not contacting with me. Her sister told me that she is in the hospital. She is sick and maybe will take sometime to recover. She said that she might do big effort at work, so that affected on her health. I went there and she was lying on the bed. She saw me and smiled at me. I saw the apologizing in her eyes. I got what she wanted to say and I smiled to her in return. As I went out from the hospital, I caught a sight of my dream knight...He was there with his friend. So he came to visit her. And what I was thinking was right! Oh. This is the end. But when he saw me he stopped for the first time and it was clear that he wanted to talk to me. Why? What he wants to tell me? I ran without consciousness.
    I got my home and lied down until morning. In the morning, I went to the hospital to see her, and when I got her room she wasn't there!!! What happened? Is she ok? I asked the doctor, he said that he her condition is in danger!!! What?? But how??? She is ok...Nothing is bad with her? Why?

    To be continued
     
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  11. Rita Alshoaibi

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    i wait for the next part BERO
    because i like to read the story

    thanks for sharing this


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  13. BLUE RAY

    BLUE RAY عضو متميّز

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    waiting for the rest...some yhing is missing


    :D:D
     
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    W[grade="00008B FF6347 008000 4B0082"]ooooooooooooo[/grade]W
     
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  17. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    Actually, she had a rare disease, which starts to eat her gradually. I could not believe. I went to the intensive care to see her. She was there...It was the hardest moment in my life. I cried until I faint...Nurses came and helped me...It was a difficult day.
    I got to her room and she spoke to me with difficulty. She told me that she is praying Allah all time and thank him for everything. And told me that "he" came to her and visited her. She was happy but she knows nothing about her true health condition. She told me that he told her life is not that bad. We have to live with a strong faith in our hearts.
    An hour later, I was sitting with her mother; he came again, greeted us, and asked about her. Her mother told him to get in because her daughter needed him at these tough moments.
    He got to her room and sat beside her bed with a smiling that give a hope of getting recover again. At that time, she was in a coma and could not know anyone. Days passed and she still at the same condition. I started to feel that I am losing her but I didn’t want to believe it.. People came and went at the hospital and I am still feeling that I am lonely with my sadness. Even "him" I could not feel him anymore.
    And that day came, the most hardest day in my life. She died. She left this life with all its goodness and badness. She left me. really...she left me...the tears fell down and burnt my cheeks. I couldn't shout nor cry...My dearest, lovely friend, died...died..
    I hugged her mother who was in a miserable case and at last I cried over her shoulder and felt how hard for a mother to lose her daughter. she surprised me with a letter in her hands which was full of tears...she told me that her daughter wrote a letter to me before she died, I took that letter with shocking hands and eyes full of tears and read it :

    My dearest friend, I want to tell that you are my dearest and lovely person in my heart and no one can be more valuable than you are...!!! I'd like to tell you that I'm leaving today to another world , I think I need some rest there, so forgive me if I will leave you forever...it is my fate to leave this life at this time and I thank Allah for everything. Take care of yourself.

    Yours...


    That was her letter...it was the same of my letter...the same words with simple changes...I left her for days and she left me forever...forever...forever.


    Bero

    The End

    Thanks for your participation in my page and this is not my real story...I hope you like it
    :D :D :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :D :D
     
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  19. Rita Alshoaibi

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    BERO
    its a really great story - its a story of a life
    i know someone who had to life exactly this moments as a friend
    thats so hard
    but in the same time: she had a more then good faith to allah and she can rest now there


    may allah give all of them the nicest place in paradies

    and

    allah bless u BERO



    thank u so much for sharing


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