My Independence

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  1. Rita Alshoaibi

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    My Independence


    I sat with myself,, and thought a lot about my life,,
    About what I’m facing in this world,,

    And I realized one thing…


    There are those nights when I cried myself to sleep
    There are those promises that were never been kept
    There are those tears that wet my pillow every night
    There are those times when I gave them all I have and got nothing back
    There is this heart that was hurt & broken many times ,,,

    And for what?!! For who?!!

    Does it really worth it!!!



    When I think of all of this ,, I tell myself screw them all



    I want My Independence


    So..

    I’ve learned how to live by my own
    I’ve learned how take the responsibilities of my actions
    I’ve learned not to trust everyone
    I’ve learned not to believe everything said to me
    I’ve learned not to give everything for those who don’t deserve
    I’ve learned to be responsible for every decision I make..
    I’ve learned how to be brave and fight for what I want
    I’ve learned how to be tough,, how to be strong
    How to survive by my own
    I’ve learned that life is a huge game,, & I should play it my way not theirs
    I’ve learned not to be so kind to everyone,, because some people just don’t deserve
    I’ve learned not to listen to what people say
    I’ve learned not to give up easily without fighting
    I’ve learned how to be myself,, and not being afraid of it
    I’ve learned how to get on my feet again
    How to create my own world

    I’ve learned how to LIVE this life…


    I’ve learned so many things in this life,, more than u can imagine

    But the question is,, did I get My Independence yet?!!

    I’m still hanging by those people around me
    Still coughed by their stupid rules
    Still hunted by their killing looks
    By their shallow thoughts,,



    I’m so sick of their lies .. Their fake smiles.. Their knife in my back with a smile on their face......
    I’m so sick of them telling me what to do and what not to,,
    It’s about ME now,, it’s my time to have My Independence…

    I’m gonna surf my own ship and start living my days without them,,



    They say: Life is Tough[/grade],,




    SO WHAT .............................................
     
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  3. الشاب عادل

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    doesn't this have to go under the poems topic??
     
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  5. الرماد

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    In the name of allah ​

    My sister Rita ... All the above that you have mintioned are in every person's relaity as well as everyone is facing most of these events in his/her life ...

    the struggling for life needs to based on our embitions and our believes .... this is the life and we are in it , fighting , crying , fracturing , stand again ... but we shouldn't give up anyway.

    This life is a very big school we learn alot and alot from its courses,,, and we have to understand what school is teaching us otherwise we will lost so many things or may be ourselves .

    That is why the independence doesn't come without Sacrifice .


    all the best my sister ... and don't give up ever.
     
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  7. Bero

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    Dear Rita....Actually I'm really fond of the poems as you know and these lines which have been lined by so sensitive fingers and so touchable feelings make me feel each line and each situation that you passed through...V nice one and I advice you to read the lyrics of Whitney Huston's song Try it on my own.....Thanks sis for these wonderful lines ...I really like it cause I also passed through such situations but that makes me more stronger........Life is Life
    :rolleyes:

    Bero
     
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  9. Yemeniabroad

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    Very nice poem... It was like speaking about my own life :)
    It made me wonder and realize...from what do we want independence? From life itself?
    :)
     
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  11. Rita Alshoaibi

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    do u think so - do u think its a poem?????????
    im not sure about that


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  13. Rita Alshoaibi

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    ok i try - and for sure - i will give my best





    thanks for ur advices
    and commenting back

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    thx so much BERO for giving me this reply


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    thanks for this nice pass - i liked ur words.........
    and
    its not only a poem



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