This is a story i wrote my self!!!! please read it!!

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  1. عــاهد

    عــاهد مشرف سابق

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    [In the dark room I flipped threw the T.V. channels and nothing was interesting. I decided to go outside for a walk. I left my apartment…and as I was walking outside I heard people arguing, and people crying. I wondered is this how life was meant to be????

    As I was walking i got to the sign and was waiting for the light to change. I saw an old man…..not a regular old man, A blind old man who never gave up hope in this life trying to cross the street. I hurried up so I could help him cross the street. After crossing the street the old man took my hand and told me “son tears are always washed away with allah’s help”……… How did he know what I was feeling??..... Where did he come from???


    I gave up thing of what the old man said to me. “Tick….Tick” I light up a cigarette. As i smoked that cigarette i inhaled a breath of pain and bitterness, and exhaled a breath of joy and happiness. After finishing the smoke of switching my passions, I took out my ear phones and put em’ on and
    pressed “play”

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    How could she think of that? What was she thinking of? What made her think of it? I would never ever do such a thing!!! Those were the questions in my mind, or should I say concerns.

    It was already 8:00 pm and the street was dark as the back of my head. I was taken away with what happened today, but then I snapped out of it and realized that I’ve walked a long long way. A path of depression. I then decided to go back home.

    As I turned back to go home I saw two familiar faces all dressed up nicely, like they were about to go to eid prayer. They seemed happy,and were laughing. I lowered the music volume to hear what was their discussion?
    “Did you call my mother and tell her that were gone be late”? The first brother asked. “Yes I did!” The second replied.
    “What did she say”? The first brother asked again
    “She said to be careful and have a good time at the wedding” The second brother replied with a smile.

    I found out that they were going to a wedding.

    “Where is the wedding ” The second brother asked
    “it’s four houses down to your right” The first brother answered.
    “Its gone be awesome!!!” the first brother said.

    I felt nosey so, I decided to pass by the wedding.
    I passed by the first house, second house ……..til I got to the corner, then I made a right.

    Woooooooooooooooooooooooooow all these people!!!!

    As I was walking around a man was calling…الئ الصلاه يا اخوتي الئ الصلاه
    The bathrooms are inside that house!!!! He pointed out.

    I went to use the bathroom for Wadoue. And after that we gathered around for prayer.

    السلام عليكم ورحمه الله السلام عليكم ورحمه الله.
    We finished Isha prayer, I looked around me and everything was white, white and shiny. Life has completely brightened itself for me. People were smiling, talking, and exchanging happy looks.

    حيا الله من جاء فوق العين فوق الراس يا اخوان.” “

    The Imam told all of us…..and then I realized that, that …I know that guy it was….To be continued!
     
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  3. Rita Alshoaibi

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    really u made me noisy - how it will go on
    dont let us wait so long
    its a really good story


    thx ahad for sharing
    and
    blessed and happy friday to u


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  5. عــاهد

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    Thx of passing by Rita, the second part won't take too long.

    its gonne be a good story, so watch out!!!!


    were you the one who sticked the topic?
     
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  7. ابراهيم صياد

    ابراهيم صياد قلم ذهبي

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    what up ahad whats going on brother hope you alright
    and by the way nice story it looks that your an english major or at least you should be
    thanks

    for your own advice you will get more deeds if you post something other than songs
    because posting songs will hurt you alot becuase who ever listens your deeds are burning thank you its just an advice
     
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  9. عــاهد

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    Thx for the Advice bro, Insha allah.

    salam
     
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  11. الشاب عادل

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    i didn't understand a thing

    what's up with the old man? then ur mother?? then first brother...what is going on??? and what's worst? the topic is pinned! lol
     
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  13. الشاب عادل

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    i liked the song though

    it's the best of all rashed's songs

    i give u credit for that
     
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  15. samiah

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    Mashallah
    I liked the last part of the story


    waiting for part 2.......
     
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  17. عــاهد

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    Thx for the pass

    salam
     
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  19. عــاهد

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    Hey Samiah, Whats up? Yea just wait its coming soon.
     

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