to western woman

الكاتب : Rita Alshoaibi   المشاهدات : 596   الردود : 4    ‏2007-05-19
      مشاركة رقم : 1    ‏2007-05-19
  1. Rita Alshoaibi

    Rita Alshoaibi مشرف سابق

    التسجيل :
    ‏2006-07-02
    المشاركات:
    11,468
    الإعجاب :
    0
    TO WESTERN WOMEN



    When you look at me
    all you can see
    Is the scarf that covers my hair
    My word you can't hear
    Because you're too full of fear,
    Mouth gaping, all you do is stare.
    You think it's not my own choice,
    In your own "liberation" you rejoice.
    You're so thankful that you're not me.
    think I'm uneducated,
    Trapped, oppressed and subjugated.
    You're so thankful that you are free.

    But Western women you've got it wrong-
    You're the weak and i'm the strong,
    For I've rejected the trap of man.
    Fancy clothes- low neck, short skirt,
    These are devices for pain and hurt,
    Always jumping to the male agenda,
    Competing on his terms.
    No job share, no baby-sitting facilities,
    No feeding and diaper-changing amenities.
    No equal pay for equal skill-
    Your job they can always fill.
    Is this liberation?
    A person with ideas and thought,
    I'm not for sale, I can't be bought.
    I won't decorate anyone's arm,
    Nor be promoted for my charm.
    There's more to me than playing coy.
    Living life as a balancing game- mother,
    Daughter, wife, nurse, cleaner, cook, lover-
    And still bring home a wage.
    Who thought up this modern "freedom"
    Where man can love'em and man can leave 'em.
    This is not free but life in a cage.
    Western women you can have your life.
    Mine- it has less strife.
    I cover and I get respected
    Surely that's to be expected-
    For I won't demean the feminine
    I won't live to a male criterion.
    I dance to my own tune,
    And I hope you see this very soon,
    For your own sake- wake up and use your sight!
    Are you so sure that you are right?
     
  2.   مشاركة رقم : 2    ‏2007-05-20
  3. Hunting-Lover

    Hunting-Lover قلم ذهبي

    التسجيل :
    ‏2007-01-26
    المشاركات:
    5,383
    الإعجاب :
    0
    Wow. Great, very nice poem
    That represents your good and great feelings toward
    your relegion.. May allah count that among your
    good deeds.. And forgive all your sins...
    Thank you so much Rita
     
  4.   مشاركة رقم : 3    ‏2007-05-20
  5. Rita Alshoaibi

    Rita Alshoaibi مشرف سابق

    التسجيل :
    ‏2006-07-02
    المشاركات:
    11,468
    الإعجاب :
    0



    im so glad about ur feedback

    thank u so much hunting_lover

    [​IMG]
     
  6.   مشاركة رقم : 4    ‏2007-05-21
  7. أبو جعفرالمنصور

    أبو جعفرالمنصور عضو

    التسجيل :
    ‏2007-05-05
    المشاركات:
    61
    الإعجاب :
    0
    thank u my bro

    i like ur word so much

    it reach the deepest part in my heart


    thank u

    thank u

    thank u

    so much go on


    with my love
     
  8.   مشاركة رقم : 5    ‏2007-05-24
  9. Rita Alshoaibi

    Rita Alshoaibi مشرف سابق

    التسجيل :
    ‏2006-07-02
    المشاركات:
    11,468
    الإعجاب :
    0


    thanks so much for ur nice feedback
    u are always WELCOME
    have a nice day

    [​IMG]
     

مشاركة هذه الصفحة