Women Of The Veil

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  1. Rita Alshoaibi

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    WOMEN OF THE VEIL


    Her long, thick, shiny black hair
    Fell against her back.
    Her rich, copper skin
    Gleamed in the sunlight.
    Her slender figure outlined,
    With her soft voluptuous curves.
    But when she stepped outside,
    She became a ghostly figure of the night.
    Nothing more to the people
    Than a dark, shadowy figure of oppression.
    But she showed them.
    As she walked down the street,
    People made way,
    Men lowered their gazes in utmost respect.
    And others whispered,
    As she held her head up high,
    With pride in her belief
    And showed them how oppressed she really was!
    While they whistled at their women,
    Looking them up and down as they were
    pieces of meat to be inspected?
    She pitied their savage ways.
    As she walked into the arms of
    her partner,
    Her only love,
    Her husband.
    Where she was transformed,
    Into her beautiful self,
    For only his eyes to see.



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    You always .......1

    I like it, especial these:

    Men lowered their gazes in utmost respect.
    And others whispered,
    As she held her head up high,
    With pride in her belief
    And showed them how oppressed she really was!
    While they whistled at their women


    By the way, I became know many words during some of day



    thank you :) :) :)
     
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  5. maram

    maram عضو فعّال

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    wow that was a great poem
    thatnx Rita
     
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  7. Rita Alshoaibi

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    i thank u for ur always so kind answers
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  9. Rita Alshoaibi

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    MARAM as always
    im glad how u comment this topic



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    thank u so much
     
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    Jazaki Allah Khair
    good work plz keep on and Allah bless u
     
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  13. Rita Alshoaibi

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    thank u so much for this kind feedback

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