We won the presidential Elections .... Please don't get me wrong

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  1. yemenyniga

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    It is few words I always wished to hear
    No matter how much we struggeled and how much we attained
    we had only one challenge

    It is winning the presidential election

    Some people will think I am talking about the yemeny presidential elelction

    NO

    I didn't mean that

    I meant something else

    One day after hard work , as I entered the house I found everyone in my family sitting down looking at the TV
    The first thoughts initiated to mind that something very important happened in the world same similar to the one like invading Iraq , or liberating some kind of country
    Some thing like that
    Many thoughts have passed by my mind as I was approaching my room

    I didn't look at the TV because I was sure that they were viewing something wasteful so I didn't bother

    I entered my room and without intention I opened a book and started scamming through it

    I didn't realize it was one of the stories that I read and I wish to not read it again
    with full of sorrow I read the title and it was Catcher In The Rye i wanted to read it all over at that instant but I remembered my family ,they are viewing something in the TV so I told my self why should I read a book that have been banned once in history

    Usually I don't read the same novel twice

    but the lust for reading just forced me to open the novel and start reading
    Before even finishing the first page, some one knocked the door and entered without Permission I didn't give him any attention . He approched my and came next to me trying to read what ever I read . I looked at the strange person and found out that he is my youngest brother (4years old ) I looked at him and I didn't say any thing
    AT THAT MOMENT
    I wished I didn't look at him
    I remebered my childhood when I was at his age

    It was very misrable feelings exactly same as when I finished reading this cursed book the cather in the rye before 5 years

    I just threw the book away I carried my brother and placed him over the table

    I told him right now tell my what did you learn at the preschool
    He was telling me everything with joyfull feelings
    I wasn't concentrating with him but
    wait what are my family watching in the TV of course he didn't have any idea what's going on but he told me it is a war

    A WAR

    at this time of the year

    I told him no way your definitly not telling me the truth
    what do you mean WAR
    Isn't it enough that many people are killed everyday of course i am talking to myself
    Can't the humanity feels little shame of what have they done to themselves
    Can we do something to change this unmerciful present
    the life isn't that fun after all ?? why

    I started thinking why my brother told me it's a war

    there is no ideal present war going on at this instant

    Maybe it is a war that is contaminated in our mind that we can't release it or clean it
    Maybe there is war but in the hidden world that everyone of us want to take a look at even once
    Or
    Maybe it is a war forcing itselves to be hidden so no one will dare to attack it

    Alot of thoughts started to annoying me but I felt the joyness of having them


    The voice of the moathen broke and dissolved all these thoughts and I thanked him a lot for doing so my mom called me for the iftar
    I took my brother and we went to break our fast

    At that moment I felt soo proud

    and I wished my self to be elected as a president
     
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  3. yemenyniga

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    It is few words I always wished to hear
    No matter how much we struggeled and how much we attained
    we had only one challenge

    It is winning the presidential election

    Some people will think I am talking about the yemeny presidential elelction

    NO

    I didn't mean that

    I meant something else

    One day after hard work , as I entered the house I found everyone in my family sitting down looking at the TV
    The first thoughts initiated to mind that something very important happened in the world same similar to the one like invading Iraq , or liberating some kind of country
    Some thing like that
    Many thoughts have passed by my mind as I was approaching my room

    I didn't look at the TV because I was sure that they were viewing something wasteful so I didn't bother

    I entered my room and without intention I opened a book and started scamming through it

    I didn't realize it was one of the stories that I read and I wish to not read it again
    with full of sorrow I read the title and it was Catcher In The Rye i wanted to read it all over at that instant but I remembered my family ,they are viewing something in the TV so I told my self why should I read a book that have been banned once in history

    Usually I don't read the same novel twice

    but the lust for reading just forced me to open the novel and start reading
    Before even finishing the first page, some one knocked the door and entered without Permission I didn't give him any attention . He approched my and came next to me trying to read what ever I read . I looked at the strange person and found out that he is my youngest brother (4years old ) I looked at him and I didn't say any thing
    AT THAT MOMENT
    I wished I didn't look at him
    I remebered my childhood when I was at his age

    It was very misrable feelings exactly same as when I finished reading this cursed book the cather in the rye before 5 years

    I just threw the book away I carried my brother and placed him over the table

    I told him right now tell my what did you learn at the preschool
    He was telling me everything with joyfull feelings
    I wasn't concentrating with him but
    wait what are my family watching in the TV of course he didn't have any idea what's going on but he told me it is a war

    A WAR

    at this time of the year

    I told him no way your definitly not telling me the truth
    what do you mean WAR
    Isn't it enough that many people are killed everyday of course i am talking to myself
    Can't the humanity feels little shame of what have they done to themselves
    Can we do something to change this unmerciful present
    the life isn't that fun after all ?? why

    I started thinking why my brother told me it's a war

    there is no ideal present war going on at this instant

    Maybe it is a war that is contaminated in our mind that we can't release it or clean it
    Maybe there is war but in the hidden world that everyone of us want to take a look at even once
    Or
    Maybe it is a war forcing itselves to be hidden so no one will dare to attack it

    Alot of thoughts started to annoying me but I felt the joyness of having them


    The voice of the moathen broke and dissolved all these thoughts and I thanked him a lot for doing so my mom called me for the iftar
    I took my brother and we went to break our fast

    At that moment I felt soo proud

    and I wished my self to be elected as a president
     
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  5. google

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    It seem to me there is big similarity between the yemenyniga and J.D. Salinger

    To tell you the truth I read this novel too and you really reminded me with this novel, though I don't consider it the best. I agree with you that it will make you some kind of sad feelings at the end, and you don't know why you have that feeling, though it doesn't have at tragic ending

    You brother reading too many books and sometimes I don't recommend that especially if it will turn your life into hell
    I am just joking with you, what I meant is read a veriety of books in different subject
    take a comedy book from one time to another take a heroic book, which is kind of stupid to do so , but trust me it will improve your writing

    I noticed some grammatical error and some weaknesses at some points

    just continue writing and we will help you to develop better skill writing

    By the way you have an entry level of one of the 4 types of writings

    and they are as follows:

    transcendentalism : those have the extreme freedom
    or you could say revolution of what is called past
    Romantism: Those kind of writers favors the good endings
    Realism: Those writers pointing to nature as one factor that will determine person decision
    Naturlism: Those writers just surrended to nature and made the supreme influence on decisions

    You are more Realistic to me

    that's from reading the previous post

    continue writing and I will be at your side insh alllah
     
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  7. google

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    It seem to me there is big similarity between the yemenyniga and J.D. Salinger

    To tell you the truth I read this novel too and you really reminded me with this novel, though I don't consider it the best. I agree with you that it will make you some kind of sad feelings at the end, and you don't know why you have that feeling, though it doesn't have at tragic ending

    You brother reading too many books and sometimes I don't recommend that especially if it will turn your life into hell
    I am just joking with you, what I meant is read a veriety of books in different subject
    take a comedy book from one time to another take a heroic book, which is kind of stupid to do so , but trust me it will improve your writing

    I noticed some grammatical error and some weaknesses at some points

    just continue writing and we will help you to develop better skill writing

    By the way you have an entry level of one of the 4 types of writings

    and they are as follows:

    transcendentalism : those have the extreme freedom
    or you could say revolution of what is called past
    Romantism: Those kind of writers favors the good endings
    Realism: Those writers pointing to nature as one factor that will determine person decision
    Naturlism: Those writers just surrended to nature and made the supreme influence on decisions

    You are more Realistic to me

    that's from reading the previous post

    continue writing and I will be at your side insh alllah
     
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  9. google

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    Some times I feel that I am soooo educate

    that I don't know what I am writing about
     
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  11. yemenyniga

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    You really something

    I appreciate your present

    and I want to thank you for your participation


    hopefully I will fill your advice

    by the way I just started reading a funny book is called

    I want to go home
     
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  13. yemenyniga

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    and then I will start with another story

    The kid who became a president
     
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  15. SamiAlganhey

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    You two Are WISE People
    Thats A Gift
    You Two Have Been BLESSED

    Lah El Humed

    God Bless
    best Wish
    And
    kind Regards
     
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  17. yemenyniga

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    Thank you Sami for this complement

    To tell you the truth I really respect what brother google told me and adviced though I may not agree with him on some points

    but still he has a good tone in advising

    and I do respect these kind of people

    Thank you sami

    and thank you "google"

    Man!! Why did you choose google as a name you should be higher than that
     
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  19. yemenyniga

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    To let you know I just finished the Da Vince Code

    and I am tring to figure out what to read next
     

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