Correct Me If You Can

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  1. ThE_GoSt

    ThE_GoSt عضو فعّال

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    salam to all of you guys and girls .. today's game is ( CORRECT ME IF YOU CAN)

    we will write anything and the ather memebers try to figure out my mistakes in the writing, or suggest better way to write ... and by this we can play and correct our writting .... you can start with what i wrote above ..... IF YOU CAN

    intersting ...
    when i was reading an article i figured out that some members are using phrases or vocabularies that are not suitable for that situation such as

    I hear your SOUND… it supposes to be VOIC
    and
    can't differentiate between Effect and Affect

    so I will write this and correct the mistakes IF YOU CAN

    Society today considers smoking as an acceptable thing to do with friends and relatives, when they should think of the negative affects of ******* use.

    Health problems caused by smoking also effect women.

    Another affect of ******* use is how it affects an individual’s quality of life.

    Which have the same affects to the human body as illegal drugs.
     
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  3. abukareem

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    alsalam brother

    great idea this we want it all coz writing is the most importent things ....

    i will start figure your mistak which is I hear your SOUND… it supposes to be VOIC and is going to be
    I hear your SOUND… it supposes to be voice



    thank you very much brother Gost
    my regard
     
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  5. abukareem

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    i think the problem is going to be in ( Another affect of ******* use is how it affects an individual’s quality of life.) is not it brother
    (Another affect of ******* use is how it effects an individual’s quality of life)
    i hope i get correct


    all best




     
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  7. ThE_GoSt

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    thanx man .... you are reallt kind



    All the best ... with ThE_GoSt
     
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  9. ThE_GoSt

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    thanx


    but what about the rest





    thanx and best regards



    All the best ... with ThE_GoSt
     
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  11. abukareem

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    what the matter with you brother
    even really your wrote it reallt
    no man



    hahahha all best brother





     
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  13. ThE_GoSt

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    mars

    where are you guys .. i am waiting
     
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  15. abukareem

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    sorry brother
    but what i want to improve your writing. thank you
     
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  17. abukareem

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    i am here but you confuse me brother ....... iam sick i can't figuer .....
    help me brother



    tahnk you
     
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  19. mars

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    HAHAHa... What's all this craps you are talkin about GHOST..!! I know that ghosts have AFFECT your mind, but this EFFECT wil decrease and demolish if you see a psychologist.. So plz dont affect the others in your AFFECTED words. All the best bro.
    About you ... You aint sound or seem good these days... haven't you heard EMENIM when you sang " When i am gone just Carry on dont mourn rejuiceeverytime you hear the SOUND of fmy voice'
     

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