Dream no more

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  1. The Wonderer

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    Salamu alaykom brothers and sisters.
    I am a new member here and would like yo shre with you something I wrote... I am not a writer, however, sometimes you just feel like you have something to say and you can't so you write it down..... and I would like to share with you this thoughts of mine... let me know what you think please :)

    I never thought of dreaming,
    I just whisper to the night.
    Sometimes lost in my thoughts,
    I feel like a little child,
    And sometimes I am left wondering.
    What is wrong and what is right?
    Confused and chained to my thoughts,
    Looking for an answer to a question that I don’t even know.
    How could it be that I am searching for something I can’t see?
    I know I am on the right track, or at least I hope I am,
    But does it really make a difference?
    Can’t I just go on and stop thinking of the past?
    It is hard to think of solution when the problem is hidden in your soul!
    Confront your self with the truth even if you don’t know it!
    Search for an answer to feel closer to salvation, at the end this is what it’s all about.
    Don’t contemplate on the past
    And don’t cling your soul to an image that once was your present
    Because it is not there anymore.
    Shout if you want,
    You might feel better
    But prayer is the only way
    To help you feel the glitter.
     
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  3. الا الفراق

    الا الفراق عضو متميّز

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    what are you doing
    i think you don,t have taim
    but i thank you
     
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  5. T_K

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    Hello brother and welcome to the
    English forum ...

    what you wrote was very good put

    It describes you confusion
    or your escape from something..
    maybe your past .. maybe something
    u did and wish u hadn't done

    Anyhow, thanks for sharing it with us
    and awaiting more posts from u

    regards

    TK
     
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  7. The Wonderer

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    Salamu alaykom
    Brother الا الفراق
    Thanks for being here, however I don't understand you. Sorry :(

    Brother T_K
    thanks a lot for your comment on my khatera,,,
    I am a confused person.... you can't imagine how confused I am :p
    I really appreciate your comment and you insight....
    thanks for being here and for taking the time to read that

    there is only one thing,,,, I am a sister not a brother :)
     
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  9. The Wonderer

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    and thanks for welcoming me here :)
     
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  11. بنت الفلاحي

    بنت الفلاحي عضو

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    Excellent post it describes how most of us

    feel these days ...:confused: confused

    Thanks sis & welcome to the forum
     
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  13. العسيب

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    sister first of all let me
    welcomming you as a new member of our family inshallah
    and hope to be with us

    A dream is mental activity thoughts, images, emotions

    I had a dream, which was not all a dream
    Every Night and every Morn
    Some to Misery are born
    Every Morn and every Night
    Some are born to Sweet Delight
    Some are born to Endless Night

    siser you r words really breaked my heart

    i was really far from my past dream

    which i did n' get i thought that world been closed

    i did n' find a way to run more far from

    cuz its' really was in my heart

    and as you said

    i shouted for a while with my self

    but lastly known that only pray for such things

    yeah this is what allah said
    *that if we leave somehing in the seek of him that sure
    inshallah will get better than *



    accept my Regards


    there is never wrong time to do something right
     
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  15. The Wonderer

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    بنت الفلاحي و العسيب
    thanks a lot for welcoming me here.. I would love to be a member in this family...
    بنت الفلاحي Sister
    thanks for agreeing with me that we are getting more confused these days than in the past
    even though our life is "getting Better" we are getting more and more confused

    العسيب Brother
    I appreciate your comments


    Every Night and every Morn
    Some to Misery are born
    Every Morn and every Night
    Some are born to Sweet Delight


    nice expressing to our reality
    I like the way you showed that there are two kinds of people.
    people who live in misery and people who live in delight and happiness

    Thanka again for honoring me with your posts and welcoming :)
     
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  17. العسيب

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    Sister never mind and most welcome

    you know sister that for a dream

    i was a poet

    starting to write many things about that dream

    and how should i meet him and many things which

    really changed in my life

    it was my best moments in life cuz it was from my heart

    but when it turned to be down

    for some bad reasons

    i stoped many things for a while

    i miss it

    i would like to write again

    i would like to have a dream

    but to whome i should give ????



    yours


    there is never wrong time to do something right
     
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  19. The Wonderer

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    well you can always start again to achieve your dream...
    I heard there are website that would help to publish poems but I am not sure how true and credible these sits are,,
    and rememeber that "There is never wrong time to do something right"
    :p
     

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