English poem

الكاتب : Bero   المشاهدات : 1,170   الردود : 15    ‏2005-06-15
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  1. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    [align=left]Did you see to the moon
    Did you see the light
    Actually, there is no moon today
    There is no light
    So this is my life without you
    I'm lonely with your memory
    Between the trees
    Walking through the nights…
    Waiting for your voice to call me
    Waiting for my knight
    To come and save me
    I need your hand
    Among these dark trees
    To set me free
    And to take me back again
    Loneliness is hard and,
    My heart is in pain…
    The echo of your voice is still there
    In every where..
    I was flying with wings
    I was as a wife of a king
    I had the world
    I was rich…,
    But now….,
    Now!
    I have nothing to say…
    But…I miss you…..
     
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  3. ماجدولين

    ماجدولين مشرفة سابقة مشرف سابق

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    [align=left]Dear sis,,

    What a gorgeous words which deeply show a romantic, dreamy soul
    Did you see to the moon
    Did you see the light
    Actually, there is no moon today
    There is no light
    sis this verse hurt me cause moon for me is ..............mmmm I can't explain ,but I love it when u said : I need your hand
    Among these dark trees
    To set me free
    And to take me back again

    keep on sis :)
    u r gifted and I hope to see ur new posts soon.

    Yours.
    Mag.
     
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  5. مروان الغفوري

    مروان الغفوري شاعر وكاتب

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    معقولة كثير :)


    u see the moon , mag ?
     
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  7. Dilemma

    Dilemma مشرف سابق

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    What a pretty words that won a place in my heart.
    Really i do like them

    Keep the good thing up..

    Yours

    Dilemma
     
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  9. ماجدولين

    ماجدولين مشرفة سابقة مشرف سابق

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    [align=left]
    I gusse not ?!

    May God forgive the one who's responsible of all this pain :(

    Mag.
     
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  11. lonely man

    lonely man عضو متميّز

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    Look....

    The moon is looking at you !

    See..

    Stars are shining 4 you!

    Hear...

    Birds are singing 2 you !

    Listen...

    My heart says;

    "I miss U"
     
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  13. SamiAlganhey

    SamiAlganhey عضو متميّز

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    Welcome Bero, To this Great Forum. 1
    That was a great Start. One hell of a Poem. WOW. Like my brother Dilemma said you touched me in my heart. It was that Deep. 2
    Well, Bero. Welcome to the English Forum, which is more than just a web site/Forum. Its a family when you get to know Everyone. Most of us were asked to be on the spotlight, and tell us a little about them selves. So if its ok with you. Can you tell us a little about yourself . Ex. what you like? What you like to do? Music, Movie, Actor, Place, Dreams, And what your Studin.g3

    [gdwl]*·~-.¸¸,.-~*Thanks For THE GREAT POEM*·~-.¸¸,.-~*§¤°~®~°¤§With all do respect
    Regards
    AKA
    Sami AL Ganhey
    سامي الجانحي§¤°~®~°¤§
    [/gdwl]
     
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  15. SamiAlganhey

    SamiAlganhey عضو متميّز

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    My Good Friend, What a nice Reply to a nice Poem, Bero started nicely and you finished it nicely. Great Job. Keep up the Great work, both of ya. 1

    PS. you two can be a great team.(Think about it).2

    Well, thanks bro. , Thank you Both
    Thanks For THE GREAT POEM*·~-.¸¸,.-~*§¤°~®~°¤§With all do respect
    Regards
    AKA
    Sami AL Ganhey
    سامي الجانحي§¤°~®~°¤§
     
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  17. العربي اليماني

    العربي اليماني عضو نشيط

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    [grade="8B0000 FF0000 FF7F50"]beautiful poem...moon ,stars and birds..wow..a lot of samples reflecting the lightness of the writter[/grade]
     
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  19. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    Thank you!

    [align=left][align=left]I'd like to thank all of you because with your words you make my cry.... You lift my spirit high and high and high..
    But believe me as soon as you feel what you write it comes like a meteor on your highly sky..it is a nice feeling when you need someone who is far away from you but he still loves you and cares about you.....

    About my self.. I'm a girl who born in a cave of love and poetry and living in spirit of writing and composing..I studied English language at Faculty of Arts Sana'a University and enjoy writing poems in english and arabic also..i also enjoy drawing and painting and listening to my lovely singer Celien Dion who supplies me with all high spirit that I need..I'm working now as a researcher on the Internet....That 's it....
     

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