when you love someone so deep inside

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  1. !~DeAdMaN~!

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    When you love someone so deep inside,
    It seems like it's so easy to hide.
    You've loved her for so very long,
    You would think she could do no wrong.

    Every day you would hope and pray,
    That she would always stay this way.
    she treated you like you should be treated,
    You thought your life was finally completed.

    You thought your love was growing true,
    And then one day it was all so blue.
    she started putting you down and it hurt,
    You thought all you were to her was dirt.

    she started ignoring you and you wondered why,
    All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
    You thought your relationship would never end,
    But that was all so fake and pretend.

    One night she was so sweet to you,
    You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
    Two days later she was back the same,
    You thought you were the one to blame.

    she thought the relationship was getting too serious
    And that you had become a little too curious.
    By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
    All the nice things she said were in the past.

    You thought that you would marry her some day,
    But this time God wanted to get his way.
    You wanted things back how they were before,
    But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

    It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
    You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
    You knew this was going to happen soon,
    As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.


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    i hope guys i would become one of your english team.....
    DeadMan
     
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  3. Wind Of Change

    Wind Of Change عضو نشيط

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    [grade="4B0082 0000FF 00008B 4169E1"]Welcome to ur new FaMiLy ...DeadMan(i'm writing these letters & i'm terrified):eek:
    may be u r a vampire(dead man)...just kidding:D
    it sounds like u r going to be an active member in here...so KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP
    Take care,
    Salam[/grade]
     
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  5. !~DeAdMaN~!

    !~DeAdMaN~! عضو

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    hey.....thanks alot bro...i`m really trying my best here although i`m in the 12th grade but inshallah i gonna be there.........................

    thanks once again and i`m glad to be one member in the family................

    deadman
     
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  7. SamiAlganhey

    SamiAlganhey عضو متميّز

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    Nice Poem, Brother
    I really enjoyed it
    Thanks Man


    [gdwl]With Much Respect[/gdwl]
    Regards
    1
    [gdwl]AKA
    Sami Al Ganhey
    سامي الجانحي [/gdwl]
     
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  9. Bero

    Bero الجهاز الإداري

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    It is a great poem

    [align=left]Actually I love your writings alot...so keep on and never stop it ...
    with all my best regards

    «®°·.¸.•°°·.¸¸.•°°·.¸.•°®»Bero«®°·.¸.•°°·.¸¸.•°°·.¸.•°®»
     
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  11. ااوراق الخريف

    ااوراق الخريف عضو

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    very nice indeed

    hope after this poem you will become alive man

    best regards

    awrak
     

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